"In the Clouds of Jupiter": Revised and out of the nest!

[mckitterick]

Off it goes, my fledgling story, finding its own way in the world. Final word-count is 14,500. I very much appreciate the useful and supportive comments I got from my first readers; thank you! I'll post updates as I get 'em.

Now, here's hoping I can do something besides work on this story for the rest of Spring Break, eh? I'm done with creative pursuits for a while. Tomorrow: more grading, watching Nate do a presentation to the Department about the Center's AboutSF project, and catching up at work.

Best,
Chris