help with story title

[mckitterick]

Hi, folks -

Any suggestions for the title of my Visual Journeys story?

Currently:
"In the Clouds of Jupiter"
Which just seems to need a little... something.

Suggestions:
"Jovian Whispers"
"Whispers in the Clouds of Jupiter"
"Jupiter Whispers"
"Giant Space Elevator Into Jupiter's Atmosphere Gets Damaged By Mysterious Things and Our Intrepid Hero Must Solve the Problem While Also Solving the New Problem He Discovers - Oh, and He Must Also Solve His Personal Problem"

The last one might need a bit of work. Other ideas?

Thanks,
Chris