help with story title

[mckitterick]

Hi, folks -

Any suggestions for the title of my Visual Journeys story?

Currently:
"In the Clouds of Jupiter"
Which just seems to need a little... something.

Suggestions:
"Jovian Whispers"
"Whispers in the Clouds of Jupiter"
"Jupiter Whispers"
"Giant Space Elevator Into Jupiter's Atmosphere Gets Damaged By Mysterious Things and Our Intrepid Hero Must Solve the Problem While Also Solving the New Problem He Discovers - Oh, and He Must Also Solve His Personal Problem"

The last one might need a bit of work. Other ideas?

Thanks,
Chris

Comments

[chernobylred.livejournal.com]

"Jellyfish of Jupiter" didn't cut it, eh?

[kalimeg.livejournal.com]

"Pipeline"

"Down Deep"

"Where There's Life"

"Elevator Buffet"

[stuology.livejournal.com]

I like the last one.

Oh, and I would probably have to read it first.

[geekmom.livejournal.com]

In the Clouds of Juniper Trees up on a Mountain and Not at All in Space.

Oh, wait...

[kalimeg.livejournal.com]

:: snort! ::

[lensedqso.livejournal.com]

I like the flow of "Jovian Whispers"

[mabfan.livejournal.com]

Terror in the Clouds!

[everflame.livejournal.com]

I like "Jupiter Whispers," because it indicates both that there ARE whispers on Jupiter and that perhaps Jupiter ITSELF whispers. Which seems in keeping with the story. Are the whispers a thing, or are they sentient?

[kansas-dave.livejournal.com]

I think something short would be more powerful.

"Whispers"

[uppityfaggot.livejournal.com]

I'm guessing "Elevator's Busted" doesn't work for you. I think Bukowski should have written a lot more space opera.

[mckitterick.livejournal.com]

I have a friend who wants to be the Bukowski of SF. Only she's a girl. Go figure.

[uppityfaggot.livejournal.com]

I'd settle for being the Bukowski of anything. Except I don't smoke or even drink much.

I did yer meme thing (First Books) in my LJ. It turned into something else because I never saw a list I couldn't elaborate upon.

All props to you, of course. Nice idea.